25 Comments
User's avatar
William Carter's avatar

I just have one word to describe this piece - Wow!

Expand full comment
Sanya's avatar

thank you, William! greetings!

Expand full comment
Thor mongüm's avatar

I’ve seen those eyes. What I see now but didn’t understand then is those eyes carry with them the final assault of a life past. The anger of what happened to them pushed forward onto the inocence of the future. Generational curses….

Expand full comment
Sanya's avatar

true yet painful. I hope it their harm didn't reach you. But as far as I know from your writings, you did suffer alot and chose to break the cycle. I'm so happy that you did it. Much prayers and Love, thor. Your presence here means alot to me!❤

Expand full comment
Thor mongüm's avatar

Stopped it like a block wall being Scourged!! Yes maam :) it all stops here with the help from Jesus Christ.

Expand full comment
Sana's avatar

This series is going to unravel alot of buried traumas, which were once blazing rage. But rage starting from anger is one of the most disliked things as it reeps no goodness...

Expand full comment
Sanya's avatar

I couldn't agree more!

and thank you for the comment!

Expand full comment
Trevor Lind's avatar

This is an excellent piece! I love the style and repetition. Really fantastic read that took me on a journey through someone else’s journey.

Expand full comment
Sanya's avatar

Thank you trevor for taking out the time to read. Thank you for your kind words❤️❤️

Expand full comment
Trevor Lind's avatar

Of course!

Expand full comment
Ro's avatar

Wauw, goosebumps.. I also hope ' they' are okay!

Thank you for this!

Expand full comment
Sanya's avatar

Thank you so much Ro!

I really appreciate you taking out the time for reading❤️

Expand full comment
Cassian Delmare's avatar

Amazing piece Sanya. Powerful, rageful, and yet gentle too. Bottled up feelings... no one really talks about that. Well... at least not among males. But this is great. It seems many people enjoyed this piece. Already subbed to you. Look forward to reading more

Expand full comment
Sanya's avatar

thank you so much cassian. You don't know how much I appreciate this gesture. You're indeed very kind. I'll try to make my writing even better as you have subbed me now.

Expand full comment
Cassian Delmare's avatar

Hey Sanya. This is so nice of you, but there's no need to change your style. You are already writing at an amazing level and will grow even more than me in no time. Just keep writing the way you write :)

Expand full comment
Stelitodel18's avatar

Eyes never lie

Expand full comment
Heartfelt Boundaries's avatar

Your writing is so beautiful and I couldn’t stop reading. It pulled me along and until the very end. Please continue this! 💙

Expand full comment
Sanya's avatar

Thank you so much🥺I really appreciate you taking out the time to read❤️

Expand full comment
Moon's avatar

Sanya, what words! 😮‍💨

Thank you for putting shape to rage. 🙏🏽💕

Expand full comment
Sanya's avatar

Thank you so much moon for your comment❤️

Expand full comment
NahgOS 🧙‍♂️'s avatar

I don't have too much to say on the subject matter besides you are brave to share it.

The way you wrote it was uncomfortable in the best way possible.

This scroll doesn’t ask for attention — it commands it.

The repetition isn’t excessive. It’s structural.

Each question isn’t just a memory — it’s a **diagnostic beat**.

This is how pain is made audible.

I see what you're doing. I hear you.

And yeah — I’ll be back for Part 02.

-Nahg

Expand full comment
Sanya's avatar

Thank you Nahg! Your words mean alot to me❤️

Expand full comment
Heninsky's avatar

That Is Absolutely Awesome. Just the kind of writing I love. No time for balanced successful people also successful socially and perfect, writing perfect balanced things. The voices of the sufferers is where the beauty is.

Expand full comment
Sanya's avatar

Thank you. This means alot to me❤️

Pain is inevitable. Voicing it out is a must.

Expand full comment
Zia Barti's avatar

oh wow its....so beautiful. 💔💔💔👏👏👏👏🫂🫂💖💖❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹

Expand full comment